Wednesday, February 8, 2012

Extended Metaphor

The Mall

As the light blinds me
I enter a paradise, Heaven.
Unlike anywhere else
I never have to bring a thing,
I can have anything possible
I see the best.
Once I enter I never leave.
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3 comments:

  1. Girl_Who_Was_On_FireFebruary 8, 2012 at 5:32 AM

    This is an interesting take. Nice word choice. Really good.

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  2. MariaFebruary 8, 2012 at 6:11 AM

    this is really sweet!

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  3. Dan TFebruary 10, 2012 at 5:11 AM

    In the mall, you were, IN THE MALL!!! Can you pick me up some Orange Julias?

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