Be a good influence.
Show your friends.
Reveal the truth.
Be a good influence, encourage growth and change.
They are better people than their current actions.
Their eyes are blind to higher hopes.
Be a good influence expose their veracious character.
Be the change in them that you crave.
You could make everything moral.
Be a good influence, demonstrate how to make a U turn.
Be yourself, show them goodness.
Be a good influence.
Very positive. I think you should try these things -
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Very inspirational. It is also in blank verse.
ReplyDeleteThis is great advice for anyone, the only change I would make is rewording "They are better people than their current actions." It is a bit confusing to me.
ReplyDeleteI like it. Except you sound like my mom.
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